Some Believe the people are natural born leaders while those feel that leadership skills can develop, discuss both views and give your opinion.

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a talent which can be acquired by reading, learning, writing,
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and continuous practice
Leadership
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following
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qualities
leader
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must have. Planning ability, courage,
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determination, responsibility, integrity, influence ability self-confidence and expression
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needed in any
leader
Some people believe that people are born as leaders but I believe that nothing is 100% inherited , there is always some combination
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when we learn something we develop skill. If we talk about leaders,
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Nelson
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mandala is on top. He dedicated his life o fighting for equality and
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he
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struggle against apartheid, a system of white supremacy that existed in
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Africa
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all great
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strong at communication skills. The
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largest transportation
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company
campany
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company
(fed express corporation) believe in nurturing
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of its employee. John F. Kennedy said
leadership
and learning
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to each other.
leader
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a leader
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knows how to motivate their follower (ex
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prime minister
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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