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Some people think that qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at universities or similar academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Several people believe that becoming successful particularly when it pertains to
qualities
 in
this
 modern era cannot be learned at any academic institution or university. I strongly agreed with
this
 statement. In ,
school
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 we learned so many things especially when it deals with
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theory and some practical aspects. We attended
further
 training in the field that we want to
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 in to enhance what we learned so that we could properly and significantly apply the acquired knowledge in combination with reasoning and logic.
That is
 the basis of education from the institution we indulge in. When talking about
qualities
 to become successful depends on every individual rather than the possesses intellectual capacity one has attained in school. Measurement of one's capacity to become successful does not rely on educational attainment. Elon Musk and Bill Gates are definitive examples of highly successful
personality
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 based on their trait which
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 acquired through their parents and
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their experiences. Even if the teacher motivates an individual to do certain
qualities
 to improve oneself, but still natural traits
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 already there. No one can force anybody to learn particular quality to become somebody someday. In my point of view, I strongly agree that
qualities
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make an individual
success
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 depends just on oneself. Theoretical knowledge is totally different from application to the real world.
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