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Some people feel that playing computer games has a nagative impact on children's health and social skills. Others say that it can have a positive impact on their lives. Discuss both these views.

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In recent times,
children
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's usage of
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games
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 increase because of development of the technology. Some people believe that playing
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games
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have
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 adverse consequences
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children
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's well-being while others say it would positively affect
children
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's creativity. In
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 essay, I will discuss both sides. On the one hand, many youngsters utilize
computer
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games
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 because
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it
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 contained attractive features and modifying technology. There
are
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 some equipment
use
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 for
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instead
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 of computers including tablets, phones and PlayStation. It is clear that excessive
using
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 of
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games
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 can negatively affect
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's health and physical health.
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 reduces physical activities. Because it can create diseases
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 as obesity and laziness.
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, research shows that excessive usage of
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games
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 that
children
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 diagnosed with eye disease and depression.
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, another
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 information is that it mitigates social interaction because it would negatively affect
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's academic life. Especially for growing
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.
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 period of growing
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 must need social - interaction and academic knowledge. I believe that parents should limit their activities, If not it would affect their knowledge and experience academic failures.
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,
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games
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 would aid to make
children
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 more attractive
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. Because
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games
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 contained think-related activities.
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,
that
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that child
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children
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 who play
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games
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they
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are more active than the ones who did not.
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, it would help
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children
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's problem-solving and decision-making abilities improvement and mind development. In conclusion, after a thorough analysis of the topic, playing
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games
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 has negative
impacts
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 on
children
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's well-being. I believe it is beneficial for their brain development. Gaming can help them to be creative and solve difficult situations in their childhood.
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