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Some people feel that playing computer games has a nagative impact on children's health and social skills. Others say that it can have a positive impact on their lives. Discuss both these views.

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In recent times,
children
's usage of
computer
games
 increase because of development of the technology. Some people believe that playing
computer
games
have
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 adverse consequences
in
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children
's well-being while others say it would positively affect
children
's creativity. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both sides. On the one hand, many youngsters utilize
computer
games
 because
of
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it
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they
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 contained attractive features and modifying technology. There
are
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 some equipment
use
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 for
games
instead
 of computers including tablets, phones and PlayStation. It is clear that excessive
using
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 of
computer
games
 can negatively affect
children
's health and physical health.
this
 reduces physical activities. Because it can create diseases
such
 as obesity and laziness.
For instance
, research shows that excessive usage of
computer
games
 that
children
 diagnosed with eye disease and depression.
Moreover
, another
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 information is that it mitigates social interaction because it would negatively affect
children
's academic life. Especially for growing
children
.
First
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 period of growing
children
 must need social - interaction and academic knowledge. I believe that parents should limit their activities, If not it would affect their knowledge and experience academic failures.
On the other hand
,
computer
games
 would aid to make
children
 more attractive
person
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people
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. Because
computer
games
 contained think-related activities.
For example
,
that
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that child
those children
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children
 who play
computer
games
they
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are more active than the ones who did not.
Furthermore
, it would help
to
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children
's problem-solving and decision-making abilities improvement and mind development. In conclusion, after a thorough analysis of the topic, playing
computer
games
 has negative
impacts
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impact
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 on
children
's well-being. I believe it is beneficial for their brain development. Gaming can help them to be creative and solve difficult situations in their childhood.
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