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Some people believe that because of modern technology, it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skills, but others think that handwriting is still an important skill. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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In
this
 contemporary ,generation every individual has adopted
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fast-moving technologies, usage of mobile phones and electronic gadgets is growing faster in
this
 21st century.
However
, there are predominantly two contrasting views, where a section of society claims that handwriting is a much-needed skill in
this
 era of technology, while others emphasize that mastering handwriting is not required for
this
 younger generation. I completely agree that handwriting is a basic skill which everyone should learn. Apparently, it is important for children to learn handwriting at a younger age
therefore
, it helps them to be active in their studies,
although
 for
kids
 it's a painful job to write it
further
, improves their reading ability along with writing.
For instance
, pupils should
first
 be thought to draw drawings
as a result
, they will become perfect in writing abilities.
on the other hand
, today's
kids
 are riding over technology and easy access to cellular phones provides them with any information at their fingertips.
for example
, present
kids
 have been thought to study online rather than following old studying methods
as a result
,
kids
 have been perplexed by writing.
moreover
 learning from electronic devices is easier when compared to old forms of learning. I strongly believe that
kids
 should be thought handwriting in their earlier days which helps them in their academics and it is very easy to communicate. And in some parts of the world Childers are judged by their handwriting.
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