Zoos should be banned because it is cruel to keep wild animals in captivity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Holding savage creatures in the cage is unmerciful behaviour for
this
reason zoological gardens must be closed and the wild
animals
should make free. They belong to the environment. In the
first
place, zoological gardens are so safe for endangered
animals
because they can reach food easily and they are protected from other predators and hunters.
Moreover
, zoos are great places where
people
become socialized. Children can see
animals
that have never known.
However
, no creatures desire to live in a closed area.
In addition
, because of being exhibited to hundreds of
people
, they feel stressed, and unhappy so they have some medical problems.
Thus
, the menagerie has to close permanently. I side with, zoos should be banned all species need to live own habitats.
For example
, when the lion keeps in a cage it loses its ability to predator and
then
you release it into nature it can not live a long time
also
it can not breed.
For instance
, In according to scientists percentage
70
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of
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eagles that are kept close have health problems and
this special
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this special animal
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animals
can not fly long distances. When I visited eagles I have never seen flying
also
their beaks and claws were very long and unhealthy.If the government punish the poacher for hunting or capturing maybe menageries will not find species to display for
people
then
places will lock. In
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conclusion
conlusion
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conclusion
, zoological gardens are supposed to lock down and these places should not be visited where
animals
can not be free.
People
should be sensitive to
this
situation.
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