You are planning to travel abroad and would like to ask your friend to take care of your apartment and pet cat while you away Write a letter to your friend in your letter explain how long and why you will be away describe the tasks you would like your friend to do tell your friend that he is welcome to stay in your apartment.

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Dear Sam, how is
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every thing
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? I hope you're
staelled
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stalled
down in your new apartment. Guess what? My cousin Anne, she will marry
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week! and I need you to give me hand . let me tell you what's happened since her
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visit to New York, she met her fiance, Jack on the plane on her way
home
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and since
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they start dating and things went well with them. We couldn't believe how fast
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decided to marry, but we are all happy for them. I wonder if I can ask you to take care of my
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apartment
and Lucy for five days. I will be travelling
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Sunday because as you know we have
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cermonies
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ceremonies
bfore
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before
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the marriage party. so I'll go by
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and come back Friday night. If you are okay with that I need you to do
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few things for me. the
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put the
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food for Lucy twice a day. There is a measuring cup with
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here
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food bag so no worries about the amounts needed per portion. and the water
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bowl
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bowel
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is there
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you need to change it one
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per day only. and the watering system is already
setteled
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in the back yard you just need to open it for two hours before you
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to sleep. I know you have to drive
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one hour a day and you
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barely
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rarely
have
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to rest but if you do not mind you can
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stay
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my
home
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to save
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as your
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workplace
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work place
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is fifteen minutes by car from my
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. if
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yu
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do not mind
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for me please send me as I haven't
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much
time
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to find another one to help me with that. drop me a line when you can. see you, Noura.
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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