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Overpopulation is a big problem today in many major urban centers. What are the causes, and possible solutions?

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Growing
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population
 is a big concern in today's world . Different reasons can be assigned for the increased
population
for instance
 lack of knowledge among individuals and
solution
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the solution
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 lies in governments taking measures to help people understand the consequences of the
population
 . So , the
first
 cause of
population
 increase is the lack of sex
education
 amongst various classes of people . Having
discussion
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 about sex
education
 is still considered
a
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taboo in many developing and underdeveloped countries .
Therefore
 , less use of contraceptives
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 to
number
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 of children born in any country The solution for the issue is to organize campaigns by the government to educate the masses about the impact the adding
population
 has on our planet earth and
resources
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its resources
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 . By discussing the root cause and teaching about
importance
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the importance
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 of
use
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 of contraceptives , there can be a lot of
education
 delivered to all the youngsters . To conclude , through proper
education
 and
caompaigns
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campaigns
 by the governments , the young people can be delivered with the message about why
increased
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population
 is not a boon for
earth
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the earth
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 .
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