Some people think that the increase in international travel has a negative impact on the environment and should be restricted. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

It goes without saying that the number of international trips has increased

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because

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nation has more possibilities to

travel

as they started to earn more money. People’s opinions differ, as to whether international flying should be restricted due to the negative impact on the

environment

, while others don’t see any problem

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it. Personally, I believe that international

travel

imposes some risks on the surroundings, but those effects can be mitigated.

To begin

with, we know that the ecological situation in the world is getting worse and worse, and, of course, partly it happens because of the fact that the number of flights has skyrocketed if we compare it with those 50 years ago. There has been

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by environmentalists that the amount of pollution emitted by aeroplanes.

In addition

, mankind is getting more and more capricious they are not satisfied with just ancient architecture, they want something unique in places that are vital eco-system, especially those fragile areas like Antarctica.

That is

why many folks opt for restricting international flights.

Moreover

. it has an effect on nature surrounding and dwellers who live near the airport

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as noise pollution and

air

pollution.

On the other hand

, another reason that affects the

environment

is most travellers generate waste, which has a deep impact on the local urban image. They are ignorant and do not respect the rule of the place they visit.

For instance

, some people who live near the seaside have often complained that visitors who come to the beach leave some waste food and plastic bottles in the sand.

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international

air

travel

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be an alarm for health security

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to be more active in controlling disease transmission through

air

travel

. As international

air

travel

may ease the mobility of people travelling from one to another place, the high transmission of some

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the traveller or even other community. Since that, the health agencies will be stimulated to expand the prophylactic intervention to ensure that the travellers are secure from disease and will eliminate the spreading of diseases itself. In my opinion, as people are used to travelling it will be very difficult to restrict international flights, and it will affect greatly tourist business, and tourists will lose jobs. I think that we should better try to find other solutions by explaining the impact of the flight on tourism so they can choose to

travel

by train, and as it has become more comfortable \ faster and convenient, it will reduce any threats to the

environment

. In conclusion, there are risks to the

environment

from increased international tourism, but

such

travel

is important and any risks can be offset by different measures.