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Some believe in enrolling their children into the best schools so that they learn to socialize while others believe that homeschooling is a better option. Discuss both views and where do you stand on this topic?

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Parents always try to provide
best
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 education for their offspring in all ways. Many think that schools assist better future for their kids to become socialize while other
believes
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 that if children study at home
then
 will gain good skills. In
this
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side
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 of
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my views
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views
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 and my opinion in the following paragraphs.
To begin
 with, it is
good
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 choice for students if they study in
school
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a school
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 environment because social learning is only gained with teachers and friends.
Moreover
, knowledge and skills can be improved in
school
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the school
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 environment.
For example
, many youngsters make
career
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 at
international
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 level in games if they joined some academies and meet new people who
helps
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 them to choose
right
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 path.
Furthermore
, it is
also
 included in the syllabus as they can easily learn social behaviour through interacting with
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 of students
come
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 from
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several.
On the other hand
, little one always feels comfortable with their guardians. The kids spend most of their time in the house with a mother and father and imitate almost all things from them. So, the old fogies should start teaching
of
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the
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socialization to the babies from their house.
For instance
, if the
parental
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 shows how to greet seniors, the young one will learn the importance of greeting.
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,
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youngsters should be taught not to discriminate
any
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 member of
the
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society and make
the
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new friends. In conclusion,
despite
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the
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enrolling in a superior learning institution and teaching in a home both have their own significance. So, I tend to feel socializing through
the
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 parents
are
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 the best alternative
instead
 of fully
rely
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 on the schools.
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