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Write about the following topic: In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#topic #countries #people #newspapers #news #tv
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today's
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time
 we have a huge generation gap
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 to our forefathers when they had half the population we have now and since their generation was not much
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advanced
adavanced
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advanced
 and had nothing much to do they enjoyed spending their free
time
 reading newspapers or find themself lucky if they watched the
news
 on
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television. In most
of
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the
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developed
countries
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 the young people of
this
 era
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 their childhood from high school at
very
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 early age and they remain
continnum
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continuum
continue
 occupied by
time
 which has been scheduled and
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prepared
preparped
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prepared
 by their teachers. They remain constantly busy
continously
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continuously
 even at home after school and hardly
has
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 any
time
 to sit
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in front
infront
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in front
 of the TV
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because
becasue
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because
 of the
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homework
homeworks
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homework
 assigned due
next
 period. For
an
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example
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children
childrens
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children
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 in
the
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Canada are supposed to start
kindergaden
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kindergarten
 studies at the age of 3 to 4 years old and
carries
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 on. From the
first
 day they are being introduced to a smart mobile phone, smart tablet device or computer and they do not learn the
habbit
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habit
 borne by their parents of reading
news
 from paper or
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through
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though
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through
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 a tv.
Techonlogies
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Technologies
 have removed hard copies of
news paper
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newspaper
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out of
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 the market. and claiming them wastage. There is
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definitely
definetly
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definitely
 a generation gap and rapid
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technology
techonology
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technology
 differences.
A
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smart
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smartphones
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phones
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phone
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 today just not only make phone calls and holds contact numbers but it has become
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game changer and has changed our living standard.
Such
 phones
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 access to any
news
 of any
time
 in just one click and
brings
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 you
live
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to live
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 update around the
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world
wolrd
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world
 to your
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fingertips
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finger tips
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fingertips
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. I think reading
news paper
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newspaper
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 and watching
news
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the news
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 on tv is just a waste of
time
 and resources and they should consider
download
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 their favourite
news
 channel apps
in
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 their mobile phone to follow up with daily live up to date and read it or watch it once a day.
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