Motor vehicle crashes are one of the leading causes of teen deaths. To prevent such road accidents, the government should ban people under 24 to drive motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently,the death

rate

of youths

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increased markedly in our society. Accidents involving

use

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of cars have contributed massively to casualties involving

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adolescents and the governing body of the state has decided on placing a ban on

use

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the use

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of

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motorbikes

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motor bikes

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by people of

this

age group. I strongly agree with

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notion and

reasons

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to buttress my point will be discussed in

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To begin

with, younger ones are experiencing

high

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rate

of accidents along

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pathways

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path ways

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while using okada.

This

is attributed to careless driving practices expressed while speeding

through

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highways.For illustration, a study conducted in June 2020, showed that 70-80% of adolescents drive at a speed

rate

of 260km/hr.With

this

, there is

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risk of running into the lanes of vehicle users

thus

resulting in

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crash

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and consequent death.

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,

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number of the youths drive more at night with no illumination.

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, their view gets obstructed which

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inturn

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leads them to bump into stationary objects

such

as trees and electric poles.

On the other hand

, the role of

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motor cycle

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motorcycle

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as a means of transportation amongst individuals below the age of 24

are

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numerous.

First

, they are small sized when compared to vehicles

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could be used to navigate through narrow routes since most of our roads are untarred.

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,

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akoka

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Takaoka

city in Ibadan has mainly untarred pathways and delivery to

this

area is by

use

of bikes.

In addition

, the juveniles have the eagerness to deliver errands urgently and with

use

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the use

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of helmets and

speed

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the speed

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of bikes,these issues are quickly attended to. In Conclusion,

rate

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of crashes on the highways

are

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high mostly with

use

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the use

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of cars.The leaders believe that stopping the youths from using motorcycles will contribute significantly

in

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reducing

the

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this

occurrence and I strongly agree

to

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this

.

However

, there are still some benefits of motorcycle usage amongst

this

age group.