Motor vehicle crashes are one of the leading causes of teen deaths. To prevent such road accidents, the government should ban people under 24 to drive motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Recently,the death
rate
of youths have
increased markedly in our society. Accidents involving Change the verb form
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use
of cars have contributed massively to casualties involving Add an article
the use
the
adolescents and the governing body of the state has decided on placing a ban on Correct article usage
apply
use
of Add an article
the use
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motorbikes
motor bikes
by people of Correct your spelling
motorbikes
this
age group. I strongly agree with this
notion and reasons
to buttress my point will be discussed in Correct article usage
the reasons
paragraphs
below.
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the paragraphs
To begin
with, younger ones are experiencing high
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a high
rate
of accidents along Correct your spelling
pathways
path ways
while using okada. Correct your spelling
pathways
This
is attributed to careless driving practices expressed while speeding through
highways.For illustration, a study conducted in June 2020, showed that 70-80% of adolescents drive at a speed Change preposition
on
rate
of 260km/hr.With this
, there is elevated
risk of running into the lanes of vehicle users Add an article
an elevated
thus
resulting in vehicle-bike
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a vehicle-bike
crash
and consequent death. Fix the agreement mistake
crashes
Furthermore
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number of the youths drive more at night with no illumination.Change the article
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the good
Hence
, their view gets obstructed which Correct your spelling
in turn
inturn
leads them to bump into stationary objects Correct your spelling
in turn
such
as trees and electric poles.
On the other hand
, the role of Add an article
the motor
a motor
motor cycle
as a means of transportation amongst individuals below the age of 24 Correct your spelling
motorcycle
are
numerous. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
First
, they are small sized when compared to vehicles thus
could be used to navigate through narrow routes since most of our roads are untarred. Correct word choice
and thus
For example
, the
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apply
akoka
city in Ibadan has mainly untarred pathways and delivery to Correct your spelling
Takaoka
this
area is by use
of bikes. In addition
, the juveniles have the eagerness to deliver errands urgently and with use
of helmets and Correct article usage
the use
speed
of bikes,these issues are quickly attended to.
In Conclusion, Correct article usage
the speed
rate
of crashes on the highways Correct article usage
the rate
are
high mostly with Correct subject-verb agreement
is
use
of cars.The leaders believe that stopping the youths from using motorcycles will contribute significantly Add an article
the use
in
reducing Change preposition
to
the
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apply
this
occurrence and I strongly agree to
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with
this
. However
, there are still some benefits of motorcycle usage amongst this
age group.Submitted by vnwekwe on
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