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Essay Sample Some scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it as a positive development while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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We can see now in
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 day how
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technology
 has become an important thing and we used
for
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 everything and one of the devices
is
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in
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 the
computer
 and we use it in education and work every year scientists are
development
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computer
by
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negative
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 and positive
way
 until the
computer
become
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 very smart ,but the question is if
this
 good or bad thing.
Firstly
, we have many benefits of the
computer
 like use in
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study and work and all
people
 if they want to
saved
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any thing
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anything
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 they will use the
computer
furthermore
, we know how the
computer
 is very smart and if any company want to
shoe
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 you how it strong be the smart and the
development
 the devices good for
people
becuase
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because
 they can help us more easily and faster , so the
development
 good for us .
Second
, in another
way
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 if we
devepment
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development
the
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technology
 more and more I
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think
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thing
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this
 is
bad
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way
,
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because perhaps it will control the minds of users like some
people
 say will become more intelligent than human beings ,but I don't agree with
this
 idea because the
technology
 can't be smarter than
people
 because it was discovered and developed by humans.
Lastly
, we have a lot of benefits and
very
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 necessary and
the
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technology
have
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 some bad thing ,bat it is not like monster will be smarter than
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human because all
development
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 the hands of men ,so we must preserve it in a useful
way
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