You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. , and what effects does this have on animal life and human society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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Water
bodies like rivers, lake or sea is the base of life and nowadays the most polluted as well. It has been universally acknowledged that the problem of
water
pollution is escalating at an alarming rate in
current
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scenario.
This
problem is
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a depressing magnitude.There is a plethora of reasons why it can impact nature . In
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further
light will be shed on the concern why
people
are majorly concerned. Commencing with the effect on the animal
first
, all the animals are dependent for their
food
on rivers or sea either directly or indirectly. Fish lives in
water
and are hunted by birds or animals. Because of ,
pollution
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they will lose their habitat which can cause the extension of many fishes .
On the other hand
, Human society
also
uses that
water
in their daily life
for example
in farming
,
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and cooking. Polluted
water
can cause soil erosion or poison
food
.
Additionally
,
this
can lead to soil infertility which will impact on
growth
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of
food
. I would like to give an example of the Yamuna
river
, which is located in the heart of Delhi city. Most of the factories are near
this
river
and dump all the garbage in
this
river
.
As a result
of
this
act , the
river
is now highly polluted and a foam-like layer is populated on the surface of the
water
. It is considered a holy
river
in India and many
people
come to worship it on
few
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festivals. Due to pollution , it is hard to stand near the
river
due to the bad smell and many
people
are consuming
this
highly polluted
water
. To Sum up ,
Food
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chain is dependent on the
water
bodies like rivers, lakes or seas and polluting them will impact everyone .
That is
why
people
who seek to protect the environment are major concerns.
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