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Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly nagetive impact on local inhabitants and the environment, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

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Tourism
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 is someone who travels to another place to see
places
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 of interest. When the number of tourists increases in society,
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 issue impact society some
people
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 claim that it is a bad effect on their inhabitat but the government claim that it is good earnings for the
country
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. So there are some advantages and disadvantages of
tourism
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 in a society.
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,
tourism
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 has challenges when it becomes to a
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. At ,
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 visitors can make a bad traffic jam in some
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 as stores, streets, museums, etc. It makes
people
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 angry and sad because their peace and security are hurt. They are a foreign person that nobody knows and so it expects that
people
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 Inhabitat react.
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, visitors have different religions which makes some problems for them and the
people
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 that live there.
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, if they go to a religious site and they do not know the rules about that site it probably creates a fight between tourists and
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.
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 some drawbacks there are and some benefits.
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,
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 creates an economic boom. They visit a lot of
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 ,especially historical
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 and
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 buy handcraft that makes a source of income for the
people
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 of that place and the government. Another reason is a cultural exchange between visitors and native
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. Native
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 can learn new cultures and
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 languages through
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 native
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 can expand their traditions through
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. The
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 reason is to make a good relationship between two countries by travelling to each other’s
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. In conclusion, there are some drawbacks and benefits to
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 but the advantages are more than disadvantages so
tourism
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 is useful for a
country
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 .

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