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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.
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the map demonstrates the structure of
industrial
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the industrial
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 area in the town at
current
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the current
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 time, there
are
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is
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 some housing around
a
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the
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sreright
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right
 way and a
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squre
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square
that is
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 located
at the end
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 of
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the streight
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streight
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straight
 way.
additionaly
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, there is a river
at
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the north of the plane. by the next years, the future plane will have
cahnged
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changed
.
firstly
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,
adding
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the
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another
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squre
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square
 which will locate
in
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south
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the south
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 of
current
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the current
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squre
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square
.
secounly
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Secondly
, the location of housing will
cahange
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change
 in future. regarding scores that will add in
furure
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future
, a way will apply in the north of the current
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squre
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square
 that will be continued
to
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over the river.
moreover
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 the school and
play ground
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playground
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 or
another
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other
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 side shops and medical
center
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centre
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 will have located at the
este
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estate
 and
suoth
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south
 of
plane
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the plane
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respectivly
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respectively
. to
summerize
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summarize
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, the industrial area will have converted into
better
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a better
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residensial
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residential
 area, by next years

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words squre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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