Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples

Nowadays it is argued by

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section of people

having

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domestic pets

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good for

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population, whilst others think that it is risky and unhealthy. In

this

context as far as I am concerned, I would agree with the

first

opinion.

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statement will elaborate on both options along with examples.

Firstly

, having a

pet

such

as a dog or

cat

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a cat

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in a house brings happiness, peace, and security to the family. As the targeted audience in

this

context are children, having a domestic

pet

gives a

child

to act responsibly.

For example

, when a

child

gets bullied in school and no one to communicate about it, they come home and talk to their

pet

, as they treat the

pet

as their companion.

This

supports the

child

mentally and physically as well.

Secondly

, as for the latter opinion, there are

risk

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of having a

pet

as well,

however

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I believe that

this

can be controlled by giving the necessary vaccinations to the

pet

.

For instance

, cats always find a way to sneak out of the house. It can carry contaminated bacterial creatures on them or rabies from the surrounding which could lead to a type of disease

onto

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the

child

. In conclusion, I believe regardless of the danger and unhealthy of keeping a

pet

can be always controlled and maintained by providing the necessary treatments. The core objective is that it supports the

child

to be independent, supportive, be responsible

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their own work as well as help them be healthy physically and mentally.