Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples

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Nowadays it is argued by
certain
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section of people
having
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that having
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domestic pets
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good for
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population, whilst others think that it is risky and unhealthy. In
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context as far as I am concerned, I would agree with the
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opinion.
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, having a
pet
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such
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as a dog or
cat
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a cat
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in a house brings happiness, peace, and security to the family. As the targeted audience in
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context are children, having a domestic
pet
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gives a
child
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to act responsibly.
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, when a
child
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gets bullied in school and no one to communicate about it, they come home and talk to their
pet
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, as they treat the
pet
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as their companion.
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supports the
child
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mentally and physically as well.
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, as for the latter opinion, there are
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of having a
pet
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as well,
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however
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I believe that
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can be controlled by giving the necessary vaccinations to the
pet
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.
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, cats always find a way to sneak out of the house. It can carry contaminated bacterial creatures on them or rabies from the surrounding which could lead to a type of disease
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the
child
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. In conclusion, I believe regardless of the danger and unhealthy of keeping a
pet
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can be always controlled and maintained by providing the necessary treatments. The core objective is that it supports the
child
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to be independent, supportive, be responsible
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their own work as well as help them be healthy physically and mentally.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • companion
  • responsibility
  • care
  • empathy
  • compassion
  • social skills
  • transmit
  • diseases
  • allergies
  • safety risks
  • time
  • effort
  • money
  • mature
  • handle
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