You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses.

Dear Mr smith, Hope you are doing well,my name is Jhon and I am working in steel
compnay
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company
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to your
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wante
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want
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went
to inform you that,recently we have been shifted to a new flat
next
to your door.
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Pleasure
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to have you as our
neighbor
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, In
fact
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the primary reason
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my letter is to inform you that, On coming
Sunday
we are planning to have one small get to gather with our family and some friends.
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but
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we are
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planning
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planing
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to have a dance party on
Sunday
evening and after
that
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we will
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serve
for dinner.We will try our best to make less noise as much as possible, We do not have
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attention
to bother our neighbours.
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I
appologies
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apologise
apologies
for any inconvenience
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caused
cause
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caused
to us. From our
neighbours
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I want to give you a formal
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invitation
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invitation
to join us
on
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next
Sunday
evening.your participation will be highly appreciated and admired by us.
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to see you on
Sunday
. Your Sincerely, Jhon
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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