Research shows that some activities are good for health and othe are bad.Desapite knowing that millions of people engange in unhealthy activites. What is the cause of this? What can be done?

Investigation and analysis of
activities
, that affect the health of
people
in both positive and negative ways, are made.
However
,
people
keep their involvement in
such
activities
, even if they are aware of the detrimental effects it has on their lives.
This
essay will explain two main reasons ,
first
, a company of bad
people
and
second
, addiction to harmful
activities
are explained.
In addition
to that , the essay explains the actions that could be taken to prevent or lower the rate of
people
engaging in negative
activities
, too. The
first
reason
is , to keep engaging our lives with the
people
that do unhealthy
activities
on regular basis.Unhealthy
activities
include smoking , chewing
tobacco
, eating junk food in more amounts etc.The list of ill
activities
goes on.
For example
,a
person
first
gets in touch with and
then
befriends
people
who do
such
activities
.
This
leads to that
person
just trying that task once eventually
person
starts doing that activity on daily basis.To be more clear , when a
person
does not smoke or chew
tobacco
, if he befriends smokers or
tobacco
chewers , he will become one of them soon provided , he stays with them regularly. The
first
reason
leads to the
second
reason
which is explained in the following paragraph. The
second
reason
is the addiction to
activities
that affect
people
's lives negatively.Addictions make
people
paralyzed in the brain.
For instance
, a
person
can not think about how detrimental chemicals he takes in his lungs when he smokes or chews
tobacco
.When someone tries to make him understand
such
things , they may not co-operate , rather may insult
people
who try to mould them.What steps could be taken to gain control over
such
a situation are explained in the paragraph below. As the saying goes , prevention is better than cure , any
person
should be made aware of any activity that will cause harm to his health when he has just stepped into it.The circumstances , where a
person
has already become addicted, should be given medical help . If needed help from psychologists should be provided , too.A
person
's family members play a key role in
this
.Government should do campaigns to spread awareness. In the end , the reasons why
people
keep involving themselves in
activities
that are detrimental to health care , friendships of
people
doing
such
tasks and addictions to
such
activities
.
Nonetheless
,
such
situations can be avoided by the participation of family and government.
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