The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.
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, diabetes cure needs very high standardized health services. If those who are in demand to get dialysis rise by almost a quarter, hospitals might not afford to provide all the needs that emerged.
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