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The key to solving the environmental problem is simple: the present generation is willing to accept a less comfortable life for the sake of the future generation to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Future
generation
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 live will be threatened due to numerous reasons. Some individuals claim that if
people
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 try a less convenient life in the present, the
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generation
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 may be less in danger. I cannot be more agree owing to the lack of
resources
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 and a huge amount of pollution which will put human life at risk. Limited
resources
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 one day will be finished,
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 some may assume that modern technology will be able to produce or replace these
resources
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 but there is no guarantee. These limited
resources
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 like water and fossil fuels will be exhausted soon or late due to the fact that they are repairable. So, they cannot be transmitted to the future
generation
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,
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people
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 may suffer from a lack of
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.
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, current
people
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's comfort sometimes is related to purchasing a lot of products called consumerism.
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 phenomenon encourages
people
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 to buy frequently and discard old goods
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, a dramatic amount of disposal may be produced. Lack of places to bury
people
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 to throw them in seas or lands despite the fact that these disposals are pollutant and toxic, most of the water supplies and human lands would be contaminated.
People
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 might consume polluted water or products that came from those lands
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and this
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 consumption could not only in danger human beings at risk of a variety of diseases like cancer but
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 life-threatening will be. To summarise, there is some evidence proving the importance of conserving the environment for future generations by current
people
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. It is imperative for governments to regulate some resolutions in order to make
people
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 save the environment for the
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generation
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable living
  • excessive consumption
  • environmental degradation
  • technological advancements
  • innovation
  • renewable energy
  • sustainable farming
  • waste management
  • policy changes
  • global cooperation
  • balanced approach
  • sacrifice
  • awareness
  • sustainability
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