You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card You do NOT need to write
Dear Director,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health. The main reason for writing this
letter is to request a new identification card
.
I lost my student card
two days ago. Without the card
, I could not enter the college because the new rule states that students need to show an Identification card
to enter into campus. Even the professors are not allowing me to sit in the classroom, the only way that I can enter is by showing the enrollment letter.
Furthermore
, I went to the library and tried to borrow a book but the librarian did not allow me to borrow it and said that I could not use the facilities in the library without my student card
, as my exams are coming, I need to borrow some books from the library.
Moreover
, I already filled out the application form required to apply for a new card
and handed it in at the reception. I would be very grateful if you accept my request, and issue me a new card
. Looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours Sincerely,
Srinivas Varma.Submitted by varmaib1 on
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Task Response
To improve task response, ensure that you fully elaborate on how losing your ID is affecting you, perhaps by detailing more consequences or explaining how it has impacted your daily activities beyond the mentioned scenarios.
Coherence and Cohesion
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Greeting and Closing
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Single Idea Per Paragraph
Within paragraphs, focus on developing your ideas further. While you've managed a single idea per paragraph, expanding on these ideas with examples or further details could enhance your coherence score.