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Obesity was once considered a disease of adults; however, it is becoming increasingly common among children. Why do you think this is happening? What can be done to help children stay healthy?

#obesity #disease #adults #children
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adult disease,
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 the disease is becoming rampant among the young.While others attribute
this
 to poor diet,children must be introduced to a healthy dietary plan and supplements. Most
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times,
parent
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parents
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 do not check the dietary needs of their kids unless the
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child suffers an
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ailment
illment
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illness
.
This
 is because
parent
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 themselves lack certain information about
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 dietary needs.
For instance
 when a mother
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 their children
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bad calories and junk
food
 but does not know
this
 can contribute to obesity the child will suffer.
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 Some families
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food
 to every other person in the family because of
lack
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 of money. each member of the family needs special dietary supplements at each given point
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 their lives. When there's no money ,
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 needs of each member will be disregarded.
However
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the parent
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parent
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parents
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 must be enlightened about their
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children's
childrens
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 health whenever they have an appointment through health education concerning nutrition and diet.
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 much as
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resource
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 for
food
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,guardians must plan judiciously to include certain vital nutrients which are available in less costly
food
 like eggs,milk,spinach, salmon, broccoli,lentils ,
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 which are cheap but highly nutritious. In summary,the
parent
 must be well informed about
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what their wards take in and
also
 include more important nutrients
into
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 what they feed their children.
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