Some people prefer hobbies that require technology, while some people hobbies does not require technology. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.
There are two opinions, one of them supports the idea of
hobbies
that Use synonyms
requires
technology Correct subject-verb agreement
require
while
the other says that Linking Words
people
do not need advanced Use synonyms
tools
to support their Use synonyms
hobbies
. In my opinion, Use synonyms
people
should make use of the development of modern technology in their leisure Use synonyms
activities
as it may support individuals to do their leisure Use synonyms
activities
easily. On the one hand, there are many reasons Use synonyms
to explain
why Verb problem
apply
people
backing the idea of advanced Use synonyms
technologies
may not be required for some Use synonyms
activities
that the public Use synonyms
love
to do Correct subject-verb agreement
loves
such
as badminton, football, or chess. Linking Words
This
is because, in some situations, many modern Linking Words
tools
can be obstacles for individuals to play the sports mentioned above; chess, Use synonyms
for example
, is a sport in which Linking Words
players
depends mostly on their intelligence and problem-solving skill to lead their game to victory, Use synonyms
therefore
, many Linking Words
tools
may be considered cheating or disturbing. Use synonyms
Nevertheless
, global citizens, without the help of top-notch Linking Words
technologies
, can face many difficulties Use synonyms
such
as, once again, chess may be highly abandoned if epidemics Linking Words
such
as COVID-19 break out. Linking Words
On the other hand
, many Linking Words
hobbies
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such
as Linking Words
can
the application of modern techniques that are developed only by gathering Verb problem
apply
players
' information by the computer Use synonyms
as
an Change preposition
apply
example
of Fix the agreement mistake
examples
technologies
being applied in these Use synonyms
activities
. Use synonyms
For example
, there are many Linking Words
tools
that have been developed and are now being used in many football matches Use synonyms
such
as the VR tool which replays many sophisticated situations Linking Words
Change preposition
in that
that
football Correct pronoun usage
which
players
have faults. Use synonyms
Consequently
, it makes many of the arbitrators' duties much easier. Not only that, with advanced computers, many teams' trainers can use them to analyze Linking Words
players
' statistics to fully develop them to higher levels and make proper training courses for the teams so that have more opportunities to lead the whole team to forthcoming success. In conclusion, even though it is fine that Use synonyms
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technologies
may not Fix the agreement mistake
technology
be
a vital role in many Verb problem
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people
's Use synonyms
hobbies
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but
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apply
they
can bring merits to those who require to have it in their favourite Correct pronoun usage
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activities
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion