Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it?
Homelessness existing in any major city
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indicates
indictes
a sign of poverty Correct your spelling
indicates
of
the country. Governments around the world have taken measures to solve Change preposition
in
this
issue for years, but there has been Linking Words
a
very less improvement.
Let’s look at the main cause of the problem. Correct article usage
apply
First
, Linking Words
drugs
have played Use synonyms
major
role in the Add an article
a major
people
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in
living Change preposition
apply
in
the streets. During hardship in life, Change preposition
on
people
tend to look for easy ways to suffer less and Use synonyms
drugs
make them feel less pain. Frequently Use synonyms
consumming
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consuming
drugs
will affect Use synonyms
worklife
and personal life. Correct your spelling
work life
This
results in Linking Words
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losing
lossing
everything they owned and living off Correct your spelling
losing
streets
. Correct article usage
the streets
Next
, in underdeveloped Linking Words
countries
, Use synonyms
people
tend to have babies irrespective of not having a house. Many of these Use synonyms
countries
are Use synonyms
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overpopulated
over populated
with Correct your spelling
overpopulated
irresponsible
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the irresponsible
Use synonyms
government
. Homelessness has been normalised in these Fix the agreement mistake
governments
countries
and became part of their culture.
When it comes to solving Use synonyms
such
a big issue, there are multiple Linking Words
party
involved who have to take responsibility. Change to a plural noun
parties
First
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
government
should take strong measures to control Add an article
the government
drugs
Use synonyms
of
the streets. Change preposition
on
People
who are affected by Use synonyms
drugs
should be treated with care Use synonyms
instead
of given punishment for the crime. Linking Words
Second
, Linking Words
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people
peope
should vote right officers in the Correct your spelling
people
government
who will take action against Use synonyms
drugs
. Use synonyms
Next
, many of the underdeveloped country’s Linking Words
Use synonyms
government
are not systematic. Developed Fix the agreement mistake
governments
countries
should help Use synonyms
the
underdeveloped Correct article usage
apply
countries
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in
creating Change preposition
by
proper
method that could educate the public Add an article
a proper
of
birth control, Change preposition
about
drugs
and how each citizen have Use synonyms
responsibility
to the world.
In conclusion, it is not Add an article
a responsibility
the responsibility
easy
task to solve the problem. There are various other factors that Add an article
an easy
causes
homelessness other than Change the verb form
cause
drugs
and Use synonyms
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overpopulation
over population
. If the Correct your spelling
overpopulation
government
and Use synonyms
people
could actually take Use synonyms
it
their Correct pronoun usage
apply
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responsibility
responsbility
to get involved and understand the causes Correct your spelling
responsibility
for
Change preposition
of
this
problemLinking Words
,
Remove the comma
apply
than
things will start to improve in the world.Replace the word
then
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