Many people strive to maintain a successful career and happy family life at the same time, but fail to do so. What are the reasons of this failure? What are the possible solutions?
In a competitive era, for a prosperous walk of
life
, it is significant for individuals to simultaneously balance between
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life
. However
, a lot
reasons prevent Add the preposition
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people
from achieving that goal. In the following paragraphs, I intend to discuss the causes and suggest some solutions to mitigate these problems.
To begin
with, the first
reason for the inability to achieve work-life
balance is technology. Everyone is more reachable then
ever before in the past. The cell phone has thinned the line between personal and professional lives. Replace the word
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For instance
, the survey in 2020 represent
that the level of stress among Change the verb form
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the
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people
is increased as they extend their working hours and perform Add an article
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task
at home to meet Fix the agreement mistake
tasks
the
requirements. Change the word
their
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As
result
, they get exhausted and Correct article usage
a result
not
able to spend quality time with their family.
I strongly suggest that effective steps can be taken to address the problem of imbalance between job and family. Add a missing verb
are not
Firstly
, prioritising the
things would make difference Correct article usage
apply
on
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in
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a person
person
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person's
life
. To explain, everyone must try to introspect and see what make
them happy and Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
then
spend time accordingly
. Secondly
, individuals should be less materialistic because people
want to avail every luxurious
in Replace the word
luxury
life
, and in that quest, they become workaholic
. Fix the agreement mistake
workaholics
Lastly
, after completing working time people
should take break
from Add an article
a break
the
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such
as,
social media and emails to enjoy Remove the comma
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life
in its true form.
In conclusion, although
to balance between work and family people
face variety
of problems Add an article
a variety
such
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a
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high level
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high-level
stress
and technology but these problems are not insurmountable. In my view, it is every individual responsibility to tackle these issues, and they should start by considering some of the solutions proposed above.Change preposition
of stress
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