Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Advertising, these days, is a critical aspect of sales in many organisations. There is a debate,
however
, on how successful advertisements convince prospective consumers of a product: some
people
think it is a very apt tool to
this
end while others opine that it is too commonplace today and as
such
has overstayed its relevance. I agree that if advertising is appropriately executed, it is still a force that customers find hard to resist. Advertising is sometimes carried out as it always has been done with little or no touch of trending technology.
For example
, these days
people
still hawk their products around and, on top of their voices (especially at bus stops or in moving vehicles), showcase their products. Some place billboards in public places without any sectarian target. The problem with these forms of advertisement is that they are too generic in their appeals. Many of the commuters on the bus,
for instance
, may not have any need for the drugs being advertised.
Moreover
, the majority of
people
are in a hurry these days and will pay little or no attention to the cosmetic billboard in the market square. Often, these forms of commercial only serve as information.
On the other hand
,
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can be technologically deployed with the aid of artificial intelligence,
for example
.
This
uses the online activities of a prospective customer and pops up products that will most likely suit his taste and
thus
, he finds it hard to resist.
Furthermore
, another advantage is that
this
form of commercial
also
comes up close to their clients- on their mobile devices, tablets, television sets and so on- where
people
are more relaxed to attend to their distractions. A click on the pop-up screen can immediately link an intending client with the company’s customer care agent in
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. With
this
added advantage of instant communication with the company,
this
form of advertising often works. To conclude, I believe that if advertising is deployed with the aid of information technology so that it can target a specific audience based on their previously studied preferences, it is a great tool of persuasion. The pedestrian forms of advertising
such
as billboards and street-hawking advertising have long lost their appeal.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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