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Getting promotion is one of the biggest drivers for people to apply themselves and work hard in the modern work place. Why do you think people are so driven to get promotion? What other factors influence people to work hard?

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in today's ,condition if a person needs a promotion
then
 he or she must
work
 hard which is the key to success in job life.I will be talking about why the public is so driven to get promotions and the reason why the public struggle.
firstly
, in today's, generation it is necessary to
work
, to fulfil the needs.
people
 are driven towards promotion because of inflation,
for instance
, if the individual has to survive
then
 there should be an increment in his or her salary, due to an increase in the price of daily needs it is not possible for one to be stuck at the same payment. he or she needs to
work
 hard for getting promoted to a higher level.
secondly
, it is observed that for great pay
people
 often switch their jobs frequently, so that they would get more money. Factors which influence
people
 can be inflation rates, maintenance costs, family responsibilities, loans, and
also
 dedication to the job. due to
this
 ,reason it is mandatory for the person to
work
 hard if not
then
 he or she can be bankrupt, as said "precaution is better than cure".
this
 can be the reason why they
work
 hard. to summarize, it is important for breadwinners to
work
 hard to satisfy their needs.
that is
 why
people
 are more towards seeking promotion.
this
 may be the possible problem why the crowd nowadays are influenced to
work
 hard.
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