You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback in this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter • describe what you enjoyed about the course • say how much cooking you’ve done since the course • suggest another cookery course you’d like the school to offer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing with regard to your request for feedback on the cookery course I did at your school in January.
Unlike other courses I have participated in, we were given the ingredients, and we could cook as the teacher was explaining the steps of the recipes, which is what made the experience pleasant for me.
I registered for
this
course as I had intentions to start my own online cooking business, and so I have been cooking and experimenting with the techniques I learnt in your course every day. The experience I gained, has helped me improve my cooking techniques and has made me a better chef.
I have been thinking about taking a class to learn how to work with fondants and how to design cakes. It would be wonderful if you offered those classes at your school.
If you have any other questions or would like me to clarify anything else, please, let me know.
Yours sincerely,
Dorsa AlamiLinking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite