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Some say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do to you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another.

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Nowadays, it is
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absolute that the
internet
 has become an indispensable tool. Certainly, the
internet
 is the fastest and the most important technology
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discovered in
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history. Some argued,
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 technology has shortened the communications between one another and
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 made the
world
 smaller. I strongly believe that
internet
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 has made
the
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communication a lot easier and much more affordable.
Firstly
, the
internet
 revolution almost accessed
into
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everyone’s life ultimately. It is nearly impossible to find one
that
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 by
this
 technology. Having to reach
to
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friends or family on the other side of the
world
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 a single click was one day unimaginable. Nowadays,
for example
, it is a piece of cake to reach
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to
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anyone formally or informally at any time via multiple mediums
such
 as text, video, voice note or call
,
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 or even live meetings. The information technologies “IT” companies have been providing
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of
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options and solutions to make everyone connected
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 the best convenient way.
Furthermore
, the
internet
 has not only artificially connected
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families and friends. Yet, it supports individuals for medical consultations, businesses, and studies. Currently, online degrees are provided and recognized by
best
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world
 universities. What only require is just to
login
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 without leaving your home or
travel
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 into the course physically. To illustrate, during
COVID 19
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 pandemic, the whole
world
 was
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social distanced but thoughtfully connected and united to pass that stage. That would never be possible without the
internet
. As a
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, the pandemic is over. In conclusion, the distance between the top point in
north
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 and the
last
 point in
south
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 can no longer be far when there is
internet
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 connection. Everyone’s can get very close, and attached to a beloved, family or friends smoothly.
Thus
, I strongly stand with the idea that the
internet
 has
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the
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distance and made the
world
 closer.
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