Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People’s opinions differ, as to whether or not competitive

sports

effect

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the education of adolescents while others think it can affect negatively.

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there are some strong arguments in

favor

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of bad influence, I still believe that it can be beneficial for the child.

To begin

with, competitive

sports

motivate youngsters to train harder,

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dedicate more quality time to the sport that they are into,

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follow

healthy

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way of life,

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eat healthy food,

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avoid bad habits, stick to the regime and many other things that they need to follow in order to be competitive and win. As

the

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victory is the main goal. In many

cases

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young people are ready to sacrifice even their free time in order to get the best results

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some championships.

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, the game

reduce

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stress,

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and banish

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banish

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different emotional problems as it is a good way to distract from one’s daily problems.

Furthermore

, playing in teams

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helps to develop team-building skills,

communication

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skills,

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get more friends with common interests and be more productive at school as all the important areas of life are in balance. In

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marked contrast, people who opt for

negative

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sides of competitive

sports

claim that

lose

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provokes in teenagers, depression, self-hate and even attempts to commit suicide.

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great

solutions

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to

this

problem is to have different phycological sessions, where professionals will share some tips

how

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on how

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to handle these

type

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of feelings and invite different

sports

players to share their experiences of tackling the feelings of

fail

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. In conclusion, while some claim that competitive

sports

can undermine

confidence

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the confidence

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of youngsters when they fail, I strongly believe that playing

sports

have

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more advantages than disadvantages, it helps to develop the minors not only athletically but

also

helping

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hem

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to understand and value the competition and even if they fail, they feel they have achieved something, or they have overcome something developing them in better versions of themselves.