Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People’s opinions differ, as to whether or not competitive
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the education of adolescents while others think it can affect negatively.
Although
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of bad influence, I still believe that it can be beneficial for the child.
To begin
with, competitive
sports
motivate youngsters to train harder,
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dedicate more quality time to the sport that they are into,
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follow
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way of life,
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eat healthy food,
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avoid bad habits, stick to the regime and many other things that they need to follow in order to be competitive and win. As
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victory is the main goal. In many
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young people are ready to sacrifice even their free time in order to get the best results
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some championships.
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, the game
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stress,
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different emotional problems as it is a good way to distract from one’s daily problems.
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, playing in teams
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helps to develop team-building skills,
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skills,
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get more friends with common interests and be more productive at school as all the important areas of life are in balance. In
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marked contrast, people who opt for
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sides of competitive
sports
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provokes in teenagers, depression, self-hate and even attempts to commit suicide.
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great
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to
this
problem is to have different phycological sessions, where professionals will share some tips
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to handle these
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of feelings and invite different
sports
players to share their experiences of tackling the feelings of
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. In conclusion, while some claim that competitive
sports
can undermine
confidence
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of youngsters when they fail, I strongly believe that playing
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more advantages than disadvantages, it helps to develop the minors not only athletically but
also
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hem
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to understand and value the competition and even if they fail, they feel they have achieved something, or they have overcome something developing them in better versions of themselves.
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