As we are facing more and more problems, which affect the whole planet, good relationships between different countries are becoming more important than ever before. To what extent do you agree or diasgree?

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countries

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to establish the branches in other

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grow worldwide and

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to irradicate poverty and other financial issues

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providing the loan with proper criteria.

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