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As we are facing more and more problems, which affect the whole planet, good relationships between different countries are becoming more important than ever before. To what extent do you agree or diasgree?

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Introduction
Nowadays most
of
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the
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countries
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 are facing
the
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problems
racism
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of racism
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, terrorism and other environmental issues so
that
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having
good
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a good
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relationship
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 between different
countries
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 is more important
in
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nowadays. To
great
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extend
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, I agree
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 the notion and the agreement for the statement is
further
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Body paragraph 1
To begin
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good
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relationship
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 with many
countries
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 will help to improve their exports and import of
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goods and raw materials in the market and
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 helps to improve the
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countries
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country's
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 economy.
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 leads to buit large infrastructure and
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able
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 to provide basic amenities.
Body paragraph 2
Secondly
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good
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relationship
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 will
helps
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 to establish the branches in other
countries
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 with their reputation in society.
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 makes the company
to
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grow worldwide and
also
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 able to make good
standard
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 in other
countries
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.
Body paragraph 3
Thirdly
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, being
good
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a good
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relationship
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 with other
countries
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helps
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in case
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incase
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in case
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 of
emergency
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an emergency
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situation
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situations
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 like
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a flood
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flood
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floods
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, financial
crisis
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crises
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,
environmental
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or environmental
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 issues.
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 leads the country to hold and fight against the problem and easily able to solve them.
Conclusion
To conclude
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,
have
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good
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a good
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relationship
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relationships
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others
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with others
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helps
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help
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 to irradicate poverty and other financial issues
as
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by
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 providing the loan with proper criteria.

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