You have recently bought some furniture. It was broken when you received it. Write a complaint letter to the store manager and say – What and when did you buy? – Why was it broken? – Suggest how the problem could be solved

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing you
this
letter regarding the furniture which is delivered today's morning when I opened the boxes with excitement and found that the glass of the coffee
table
is broken . I bought
this
set of wooden furniture on the 12th of august having 1 three-seater sofa and 2 side chairs with a coffee
table
online. I did an in-store visit but due to the good discount on an online ,
,
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purchase I prefer buying it online. The most beautiful part of
this
set was the glass
table
and
this
is delivered broken. I assume , probably it got broken at the time of delivery as delivery boys had not taken proper precautions during unloading . I would like to get another
table
in exchange , as it is your company's responsibility to deliver product undamaged. If an exchange is not possible I would like to return the
table
and get my refund .for reference , I have shared pictures of the broken
table
on your website in review comments. I hope you will address
this
concern and respond soon. Yours sincerely, Pooja
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