You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter, explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can move in

Dear
Ms.
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Johnson, My name is Artem ALtukhov and I am a student of the computer science course
that is
starting on September, 1st. I was advised to reach you in case of any emergencies, and ,
unfortunately
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I have one. The bottom line is that I have an issue with my accommodation. I booked everything in advance, but the landlord of the apartment I was going to rent decided to cancel the deal at
last
the moment. I have already found a substitution but the problem is that I will be able to move in on September 5th. Since I am relocating from Russia, I will not have a place to live.
That is
why I have to skip the
first
few days of the course. I already bought tickets and I am going to arrive on September 4th, I suppose I will be ready to attend the class the
next
day. If it is an issue, could you please recommend what options I have? I was thinking about listening to lectures online
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but have not found any information regarding
this
. Yours sincerely, Artem Altukhov.
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