Some people think young people should follow the traditions of their society. Others think thau5t they should be free to behave as individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cultural identity
  • values
  • belonging
  • unity
  • wisdom
  • knowledge
  • heritage
  • personal growth
  • exploration
  • creativity
  • innovation
  • critical thinking
  • independence
  • progress
  • stifle
  • hinder
  • balance
  • respect
  • value
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