Task 2 Many developed counties now have large numbers of people over the age 65 . What problems might this cause ? . How can the problems be solved
It has been solution may lie in
a
recent concern about the number of increasing senior citizens in developed Remove the article
apply
countries
. This
may increase the workload on governments
in the countries
and the solution lies in allowing more easy immigration from other countries
.
Firstly
, increased
number of old aged Correct article usage
the increased
people
adds to the burden on the government . For instance
, bureaucrats need to pay for the medical expenses , pensions
Correct word choice
and pensions
for
the citizens . Change preposition
of
Additionally
, less
youngsters Change the quantifier
fewer
implies
Change the verb form
imply
less
taxes Change the quantifier
fewer
Correct your spelling
paid
payed
to the government. So eventually it is quite hard for the ruling Correct your spelling
paid
people
to effectively take care of their citizens .
IdeallyAdd a comma
,
governments
allowing easy immigration policies for individuals to settle in the
respective Change the word
their
countries
. For example
, students can be permitted to study , who
Correct word choice
and
then
may plan to be a
permanent Correct article usage
apply
resident
of that country . Fix the agreement mistake
residents
Governments
can also
plan some nice strategies to attract people
from other countries
.
So to conclude , Governments
of developed Correct article usage
the Governments
countries
can play an important role in inviting people
and make
them feel Wrong verb form
making
like
home . Change preposition
at
This
will help them to not get loaded with extra
burden of paying for the old homies .Add an article
the extra
an extra
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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic
Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.
You essay structure should look something like this:
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – Problems
- Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- One of the first problems of the...
- Another problem that needs to be considered...
- A possible solution to this problem would be...
- One immediate practical solution is to...