The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offences. What extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays,
people
argue that the one way to ameliorate our traffic conditions' safety is to impose higher money than current fees for aggressive drivers
. Although
some drivers
do not agree with this
trend, the government should implement strong social restraints.
When it comes to traffic conditions in South Korea, a lot of vehicles and drivers
are driving, however
, some of them frequently break the rule while they drive. To put it simply, restrictions do not affect to reduce offensive driving. This
is because offensive drivers
might know if they speed on the highway or common roads, they end up paying only a small penalty. Meanwhile, some restrictions have been strengthened a bit more by paying, however
, its effect is not able to prohibit the driver from aggressive driving. Therefore
, some people
want to make new policies rather than restraints. For instance
, an incentive system will be able to dilute criminal acts such
as overspeed
or signal violation.
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Overspeed
On the other hand
, the imposition of fines for out of
driver's senses is a vital role in a constitutional state, especially related to Change preposition
apply
people
's lives. If they have to pay a dozen of money, they make an effort to follow the rule. For example
, when people
drive on highways, they tend to adhere to guidelines because they do not want to pay fines for slowing down if there is a speeding camera. Additionally
, if significant laws exist like cancellation of a driving license, they will keep in mind several regulations.
In conclusion, for the aforementioned reasons, I agree with this
opinion as people
must have impartial rules and restrictions to protect people
from aggressive drivers
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