Nowadays, people have greater access to fast food. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Mankind has always sought
food
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that was full of protein, fat and sugar in order to survive and avoid starvation .
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, in the roman era, meat or whatever
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contained a lot of calories was considered the most precious one. These natural instincts are still present in our society,
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is the reason why fast
food
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has gained so much momentum.
People
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like
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food
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and at the same
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they can spend little money
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it.
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, the increasing popularity of fast
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has brought many more drawbacks than
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apply
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possible advantages and, in
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essay, I will outline some of them. Junk
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contains too
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calories.
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this
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could have been positive for
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the ancient
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population, where
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supply was
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scarce
and expensive, nowadays the situation has totally changed. Thanks to globalization, we are able to eat whatever we like at an affordable
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.
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, a salad could be eaten at the same
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of
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an
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hamburger with french fries. Large quantities of fat, sugar and salt,
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to the widespread sedentary lifestyle, lead to serious
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health
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problems
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as cardiovascular issues or, in extreme
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cases
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cases
,
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attack.
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why everyone should be
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careful at eating in these places. They don't have to be completely avoided, but the less you go there, the better is for your
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health
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heath
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health
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. Apart from the
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, which is the reason why they are so popular, there are no particular benefits
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eating junk
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. Some
people
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could claim that human needs to eat meat for the proteins, which are essential for the human body.
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, there are plenty of other
foodstuff
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that contains proteins and are not meat,
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, cereals or legumes.
People
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must understand that they have to change their bad habits, and stop to
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of
these kind
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of
food
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. There are only benefits
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doing it.
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, my father was obese when I was young,
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some years he understood that he had to change.
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he started a rigorous diet and started daily work-out.
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the beginning, after
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a few
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minutes he was already
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exhausted
exausted
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exhausted
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years later,
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, he was able to run for more than one hour without any problems. In conclusion, there are only drawbacks beyond eating in fast
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restaurants. Above all, health issues and physical endurance, which is almost absent for obese
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.
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to that, the cost is
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no
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anymore a reason for going
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these restaurants as it is possible to eat healthy
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at the same
price
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.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...
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