The cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decades. This has made oversea travel much more accessible. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

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become more accessible

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all public. It can be often seen that

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has decreased steadily over the past few years.As it has both merits and demerits. The essay will discuss the main advantages and disadvantages of the low cost of

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travel

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. To commence with, the

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and foremost advantage of having low price of

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is that now the oversea

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becomes much easier for all the

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. So that the connection between two countries becomes much more effortless. Apart from ,

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through flights saves a lot of time

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people

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the minimum cost of flying

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make

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travelling easy for the world explorer.

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a famous magazine makes it clear that the rate of

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who

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via airlines increased up to 5% in

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2021 and

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rate was only 0.98% only in the

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year 1981.

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these are the main advantages of having less cost of

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On the flip side, the demerits of low

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cannot be neglected. Travelling

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more and more society via

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lead

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to an increase in the number of planes.

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will create a big disaster for the environment.

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will lead to an increase the atmospheric pollution in the

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which is the main cause of global warming.

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,

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main cause of

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in

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traffic which may cause

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accidents. So these are the main drawback of the cheap price of

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permit In conclusion, it is stated that

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the inexpensive

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the expensive

fare of wind tokens brings many benefits for

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by providing them comfort.

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,

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will create a huge problem for nature and birds as well by reducing pure

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