Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.

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The bar chart compares the percentage of household’s weekly expenditure for different purposes between 1968 and 2018. It is obvious that families spend by far the highest proportion of spending on food in 1968, standing at 35%. While fuel and power accounted for the least percentage of average weekly expenditure among all the categories, which had only 6%.

Similarly

, the average spending on other purposes,

such

as personal goods, transport and leisure

represent

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under 10%. We can see the weekly expenditure on housing, transport and leisure represent a relatively higher percentage in 2018 than the cost in 1968. Especially for leisure purposes, making up over 20%, which is the largest proportion among the other types in 2018.

In addition

, families took the same spending (7%) on household goods over the 40-year period.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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doctors
engineers
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