Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some of the researchers believe that providing their
results
of the search is good for other people
in different types of activity but others argue that is
not true to provide important and valuable research
for free.I agree with the second
type of thinking that gives free information or results
of research
is not completely true.
On the one hand, it is possible to work that giving our information which we finding out of research
to another people
because firstly
, we can give their feedback about our methods of activities, for ,example they can give their opinion about our prosses and maybe that opinion helps to optimize our process ,,
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secondly
if we interact with another researcher they may provide their research
to we and it was a kindly relation between research
.finally
, maybe other people
give a new idea about our subject and it could improve our levels of activity.
On the other hand
,if people
give their research
and results
of hardworking to other people
for free, maybe they do not believe the
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in the
research
,for ,instance they think that the search is easy to work and the results
of that are not correct.secondly
, it is possible that someone achievable the research
free but take it for sale and earn money by that.finally
, more people
when knowing the prize of something that pays something to it o try to achieve it.so for the valuable things we should fix an appropriate price.
In conclusion,we find, that some people
agree with giving their results
or conclusions to another for the
free but the Correct article usage
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second
type of people
believe that they should not provide their work and study without any price ,and I agree with the second
argument.Submitted by Fa Ha on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite