You ordered an equipment online. However, when you received, it was damaged. Send a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter, you should tell:giving the details about the equipment explain the damage and suggest what you want the manager to do.

#equipment #manager #company #damage

Dear Sir, I am writing

this

letter, to register my complaint against the Bluetooth

mouse

I have purchased from your shop. If you remember, I came to your store

last

weekend, and you personally suggested

Correct pronoun usage

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Fix the infinitive

apply

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buy a Samsung Bluetooth

mouse

. I have bought that

mouse

because of its 24-48 hours of battery backup and its smooth scrolling touch whereas, I am super disappointed by its battery life as it gets drained out within 6-8 hours and which is hampering my work. I have to recharge it during my office hours, which is not good. So, I really want you to replace my product with the wired

mouse

of the same company, I think that would be more suitable for me.

Moreover

, I would request you to please update the product information so that in future no one will face the same problem as I have faced. I am looking forward to your positive reply. Yours Sincerely, Shikha

Submitted by shikha_dhingra on Tue Sep 13 2022

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