Some people believe that professional workers such as doctors and teachers should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extend do you agree or disagree.

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and teachers, should acquire more financial income than those who are

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players and entertainers, whereas others argue that

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is not sensible. I agree with the latter argument, and the reason will be elaborated

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essay.

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with, It might be reasonable for many to have the conviction that one who is an

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or those who are capable of entertaining other people are not supposed to be paid higher than professionals.

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because society can reap great benefits more from professional workers that contribute to the community, especially healthcare professionals and educators. Take

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pandemic,

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issue has declined significantly due to the fact that medical

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have been treating countless

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patients.

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instructors, they could educate learners to be equipped with fundamental knowledge which would be beneficial for them in the long run. From

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perspective, It might be justifiable for some to consider that higher remuneration should be given

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medical

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and teachers.

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, I would personally argue in

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of obtaining less payment in certain professions, particularly entertainers and sporters, is irrational, seeing that they can provide an alternative sense of happiness, while many whose careers are

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or professors cannot do so. Numerous renowned singers,

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, have the capability to illustrate their emotions through their meaningful lyrics and emotional sounds, and

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could heal me from depression and anxiety whenever I listen to them.

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, the majority of

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athletes can

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allow individuals who are passionate about

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to have the feeling of excitement since they are inspiring them.

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,in

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respect, it is more evident that we should not underestimate them by letting them earn less money. In conclusion, despite the perception that

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and teachers necessitate more money because

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advantage that benefits the world's population, I am of the opinion that all types of professions, including entertainers and sports celebrities, sporters celebrities should be paid equally.