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Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, there are many people who claim that the
creativity
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 of
children
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 has been reduced by the
effects
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 of
technology
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.
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 there are many negative reflections of
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 on
children
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such
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 as lack of
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 communication, ı do believe that the young
generation
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have
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 a powerful imagination which can not be discovered yet.
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, and foremost,
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 has had a consistent pace over the centuries.
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, we are all
children
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 of the past and if the
effects
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 of
technology
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 had been devastating as they thought, today we would not able to invent new devices or create art content.
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, youngsters have great inspiration from the
technology
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 and the opportunities which are given by the internet.
As a result
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, A 6 years old program developer who is highly talented and fed by
technology
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, can be seen today and
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 child can create an application which is beyond our imagination.
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, the undeniable
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 of
the
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technology
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 keep worrying parents. Strong
illusinative
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illuminative
illumination
 video content
are
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more powerful on
children
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,
therefore
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 we can observe
a
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children
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children
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 which could watch television for over 3 hours without a break.
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, video games, computer games and mobile phones attract the young
generation
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 more than real life. These things usually result in communication problems and society
have
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 started to think that our future will be futile. In my opinion, even though
children
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 seem too attached to video content, it will give them a different kind of
creativity
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 which will bring us our future. To sum up, It is true that the
creativity
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 of the young
generation
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 is not visible as it was before, ı believe that with the
effects
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 of
technology
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generation
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, their
creativity
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 wont
be
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 less than before.
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