Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small, local business are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local communities. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The rapid increase of

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in some parts of the world has overshadowed local

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ability

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to compete. While some hold the view that

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will

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lead to the extinction of local communities, I disagree with

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assumption for two main reasons.

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, the expansion of

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and

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stores

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will provide alternative

opportunities

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for those who will lose their occupations.

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,

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pattern of development will create a window of novel

opportunities

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for the community. The

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reason I oppose the above-mentioned statement is that

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the development of large

supermarkets

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in an area will exert a negative impact on small shops,

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provides other jobs for those whose

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businesses

buisinesses

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businesses

get closed.

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their owners can work for the newly

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opened

openned

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opened

department

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stores

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, a phenomenon observed in many

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.

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, numerous observations in a multitude of cities in Iran have indicated that large

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tend to employ more than 76 per cent of the

shop keepers

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who have lost

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their

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their

jobs.

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, the establishment of

department

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stores

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in a place can introduce new ways of earning money. These large

businesses

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demand a

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wide

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wide

range of marketing and advertising activities

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a much broader scale compared with small shops. Another development could be the transportation and

destribution

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distribution

of products, which should be conducted more extensively. Logically,

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can offer far more

opportunities

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for local people.

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opening

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opening

of large

businesses

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can create a wider range of occupations for local inhabitants, raising their income by 15 per cent. In summary, while some contend that the quick rise in the number of huge

supermarkets

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thwart

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local

businesses

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, I believe that

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can not be the case because it can provide alternative jobs for individuals whose

businesses

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are adversely affected.

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, more diverse

opportunities

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,

such

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as marketing and transportation, are

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offered

offerd

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offered

by the establishment of large

department

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stores

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.