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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advanced technology which can prevent and solve the crime. Do you agree or disagree?

#crime #rate #technology
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 the rapid decline
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 the lawlessness
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Advanced
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crime
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 about them. On the one hand, there are a variety of reasons why advanced
technology
 can help dramatically reduce the
crime
rate
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Firstly
, it helps the security guards to control the dangerous criminals at the
prison
. Because, with widespread managers of advanced equipment,
instead
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prison
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 many hours visiting each room's
prison
 to check situation
crime
, they can now sit glutted to the camera screen and still know the sudden situation at the
prison
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Therefore
,
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 helped them save their time steer situation
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prison
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 while reducing the
crime
rate
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Secondly
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 of modern tools
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help
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 citizens to be
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 about
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 effects of social evils or negative deeps
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 people that cost them a lot. So, when they are self-aware of them, the natural
crime
rate
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 the other hand, advanced equipment can help government solve major crimes like
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muderers
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murderers
murderer
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murder
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 to death by pointing a gun at them, but thanks to modern tools, it is possible for the government to find another way to execute the death sentence without the need
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 measures fear like that.
This
 punishes the bad guys and sets an example for those who intend to do wrong things.
In addition
, advanced
equipments
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 make it easier for governments to create new laws to prevent illegal activities
such
 as drug trafficking, human trafficking and so on. Because when there is a law, they will not dare to do it and if there is a punishment, they will be afraid. In conclusion, it can be easily recorded that there
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 a row of the reasons why modern
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technology
tecgnology
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technology
 not only
reducing
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 the
crime
rate
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also
helping
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 prevent and avoid serious criminals.
Therefore
,
government
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 need to
having
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 reasonable policies to
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 advanced
technology
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