You just moved to a new city to begin a new job. write a letter to a friend. In your letter tell you friend about your job. describe the neighborhood where you will live. Invite him or her to visit you. Write at least 150 words

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Dear Lisa, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

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letter to let you know that I have moved to a new city

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Australia. Currently, I got a new job, and have been working for two months. My job is a medical

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laboratory

sciencetist

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scientist

. My main task is performing blood samples. Not only taking blood from patients but

also

analyt the chemistry and

hematology

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parts of blood specimens. Luckily, I have

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neighborhood

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who usually

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me a hand whenever I asked

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. Sometimes, They have

party

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friday

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night at their swimming pool's house. They

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always

alway

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invited me to the party. one thing that I much appreciated is that I often love their cooking. one special menu which I really into

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is that BBQ. It is literally delicious! I would say that everything was

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a perfect night. As I and you have not seen each other for a while,

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would be great if you have

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period of time in the

holidays.

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, could you let me know the time when you are available

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Do not hesitate to contact me. Looking forward to seeing you soon, All the best Jan

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8 paragraphs

198 words

6.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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