You are planing for a vacation and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:tell him/her why you want to take a vacation describe your plan invite him/her to go with you.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Amanda, I hope you are doing well! I am so excited to inform you about the trip to Ladakh which I have been planning for a long time is now

finally

Linking Words

organised. As I told you earlier the trip will be of ten days from Chandigarh to Leh Ladakh on bikes. For your information, we'll be hiring motorbikes from Chandigarh city and I come to know that it will cost around 1000 per day.

Moreover

Linking Words

, they will be providing safety equipment along with the bike to avoid hassles during the journey. There will be one night stay at Manali on the very

first

Linking Words

night, and we are going to spend our

Linking Words

two days exploring it. After that, we'll continue our Journey to other places if possible. Now, I want you to join me on

this

Linking Words

tour, as I know you love to travel and explore new places, so

this

Linking Words

would going to be the best trip of your life. My many other college friends are

also

Linking Words

coming but I want you to come along with me. I hope you'll make up your mind and eagerly looking forward to your positive reply. All the best. Regards, Shikha

Submitted by shikha_dhingra on Wed Sep 14 2022

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

198 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

5.5
band
Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is an argument whether youngsters should be active in voluntary actions in their leisure time. So both juvenile and societies could take advantages from this practice. I am in favor of this theory and I will discuss the reasons as below.
8
band
In Some Countries young people are encourage to work for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies discuss advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this
Many nations encourage their younger generation to work for a year in the gap between school graduation and university admission. This essay enumerates the pros and cons of this decision by the students.
5.5
band
Some people think that student benefits from going to private secondary schools. Others, however, feel that private schools can have a negative effect on society as a whole. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
Studing in private schools is controversial issue. Some individuals feel that private high school has advantages rather than public schools. In this eassy, first I examine this eassy from both point of view than I gave my own opinion.
<4
band
The image below shows the different stages involved in making olive oil. Write a 150-word report explaining the information given below.
The given flowchart presents information about the making olive oil. Overall, there are 6 steps in the process, beginning with olives and ending at olive oil.
6
band
The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task
Nowadays, travelling is becoming more and more popular because of its benefits. People tend to build plans a few months before starting a journey to have a good trip. However, some people argue that individuals should enjoy a holiday by the best method without schedules. In my view, I partly agree with this opinion because of the following reasons.

You are planing for a vacation and want your friend to go with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should:tell him/her why you want to take a vacation describe your plan invite him/her to go with you.

Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In Some Countries young people are encourage to work for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies discuss advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this

Some people think that student benefits from going to private secondary schools. Others, however, feel that private schools can have a negative effect on society as a whole. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

The image below shows the different stages involved in making olive oil. Write a 150-word report explaining the information given below.

The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task