Some believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays

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as laptops have been playing an increasingly important role in daily teaching. Some people believe that more funding should be allocated for

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of offering higher salaries to

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, I would agree with those who think

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still deserve prioritization.

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,

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cost less than well-trained

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. it is vital that compared with private

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,

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are more affordable, which makes education accessible to those in a reduced financial situation. Meanwhile,

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or laptops make studying more efficient. Especially in the past 2 years during the pandemic, online courses have been much more popular than before. By taking virtual lessons,

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don’t need to spend money on transition and accommodation, which saves a lot financially.

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,

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are more reliable, they are never sick or late. Unlike

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,

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have variability, not all the

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are doing a good job.

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, I believe

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give

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real-time feedback and help them identify their talents, which

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can not

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are not able to. The pre-recorded lessons are set and cannot adapt to the needs of various

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.

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,

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connect with a teacher both emotionally and intellectually. What

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bring to

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is not just knowledge, they introduce

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to lots of great writers and thinkers that later shaped

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’ political and moral philosophy. Bringing higher funding to

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’ salaries, simply ensured more qualified

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will apply for teaching jobs. In conclusion, those who feel that funding allocated for education should be primarily spent on

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are short-sighted as

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have a greater overall impact. I feel like more money should be funded

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training or paying for professional

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.