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Some believe that money for education should mainly be spent on better computers while others believe it would be better spent on teachers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays
computers
such
 as laptops have been playing an increasingly important role in daily teaching. Some people believe that more funding should be allocated for
computers
instead
 of offering higher salaries to
teachers
, I would agree with those who think
teachers
 still deserve prioritization.
Firstly
,
computers
 cost less than well-trained
teachers
. it is vital that compared with private
teachers
,
computers
 are more affordable, which makes education accessible to those in a reduced financial situation. Meanwhile,
computers
 or laptops make studying more efficient. Especially in the past 2 years during the pandemic, online courses have been much more popular than before. By taking virtual lessons,
students
 don’t need to spend money on transition and accommodation, which saves a lot financially.
Additionally
,
computers
 are more reliable, they are never sick or late. Unlike
computers
,
teachers
 have variability, not all the
teachers
 are doing a good job.
However
, I believe
teachers
 give
students
 real-time feedback and help them identify their talents, which
computers
 can not
computers
 are not able to. The pre-recorded lessons are set and cannot adapt to the needs of various
students
.
Also
,
students
 connect with a teacher both emotionally and intellectually. What
teachers
 bring to
students
 is not just knowledge, they introduce
students
 to lots of great writers and thinkers that later shaped
students
’ political and moral philosophy. Bringing higher funding to
teachers
’ salaries, simply ensured more qualified
teachers
 will apply for teaching jobs. In conclusion, those who feel that funding allocated for education should be primarily spent on
computers
 are short-sighted as
teachers
 have a greater overall impact. I feel like more money should be funded
for
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 training or paying for professional
teachers
.
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