Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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about
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on today than tomorrow for both countries and individuals. In
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I support the idea that
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should always imagine and plan their
future
, especially
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which are responsible for the entire nation. I will explain my reasons in
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following paragraphs.
First
of all,
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think human needs a
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and hope to achieve their lifetime pursuit, without it life could be less meaningful. If a person only
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by today and
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planing
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planning
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about
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, they will
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loose
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a
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interest in developing themselves for a better world.
Therefore
especially for countries having
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hope means everything for their survival in
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era.
Secondly
, by stop thinking about
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will kill
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curiosity. I believe that human is naturally curious, and
this
creative thinking lead humanity to develop and improve ourselves for a better
future
.
For instance
, we always talk about
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dream
, where everybody
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their
dream
and imagination about their
future
which gives
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motivation to their nation
also
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and also
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people all over the world.
Lastly
, people thinking about consequences that might happen in the
future
is protecting our society from social distraction and violence. Usually individuals before making any mistake or committing
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any crime, they normally think about their ramifications.
For
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there are
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of movies like “End of the world” if you find out that there will be no tomorrow
then
what kind of chaos it might create
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However
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some people spend too much time
on
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planning
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planing
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planning
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their
future
, yet can not enjoy their present life fully. To conclude, given the reason above I strongly disagree with the idea that we should only live by today. I am personally a big dreamer and I enjoy imagining
about
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our
future
and have
a
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hope for a better life.
Moreover
, every nation and country or individual should have a
dream
to pursue and a
future
to plan.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Present enjoyment
  • Future planning
  • Long-term satisfaction
  • Short-term gratification
  • Economic planning
  • Infrastructure development
  • Spontaneity
  • Immediate pleasures
  • Balanced approach
  • Mindfulness
  • Strategic foresight
  • Anticipation
  • Well-being
  • Present-mindedness
  • Prosperity
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