Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There
are
some Change the verb form
is
debate
about Fix the agreement mistake
debates
focus
on today than tomorrow for both countries and individuals. In Wrong verb form
focusing
general
I support the idea that Add a comma
,general
person
should always imagine and plan their Fix the agreement mistake
people
future
, especially countries
which are responsible for the entire nation. I will explain my reasons in Change preposition
in countries
a
following paragraphs.
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the
First
of all, i
think human needs a Change the capitalization
I
dream
and hope to achieve their lifetime pursuit, without it life could be less meaningful. If a person only live
by today and Change the verb form
lives
stop
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stops
planing
about Correct your spelling
planning
future
, they will Correct article usage
the future
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lose
loose
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lose
a
interest in developing themselves for a better world. Remove the article
apply
Therefore
especially for countries having a
hope means everything for their survival in Remove the article
apply
this
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fast-changing
fast changing
era.
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fast-changing
Secondly
, by stop thinking about future
will kill Correct article usage
the future
human`s
curiosity. I believe that human is naturally curious, and Change noun form
human
this
creative thinking lead humanity to develop and improve ourselves for a better future
. For instance
, we always talk about American
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the American
dream
, where everybody have
their Change the verb form
has
dream
and imagination about their future
which gives a
motivation to their nation Remove the article
apply
also
people all over the world.
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and also
Lastly
, people thinking about consequences that might happen in the future
is protecting our society from social distraction and violence. Usually individuals before making any mistake or committing to
any crime, they normally think about their ramifications. Change preposition
apply
For
example
there are Add a comma
,example
lot
of movies like “End of the world” if you find out that there will be no tomorrow Change the article
a lot
then
what kind of chaos it might create.
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?
However
some people spend too much time Add a comma
,However
on
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apply
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planning
planing
their Correct your spelling
planning
future
, yet can not enjoy their present life fully.
To conclude, given the reason above I strongly disagree with the idea that we should only live by today. I am personally a big dreamer and I enjoy imagining about
our Change preposition
apply
future
and have a
hope for a better life. Remove the article
apply
Moreover
, every nation and country or individual should have a dream
to pursue and a future
to plan.Submitted by nsarangua on
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