Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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on today than tomorrow for both countries and individuals. In

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I support the idea that

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should always imagine and plan their

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which are responsible for the entire nation. I will explain my reasons in

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think human needs a

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and hope to achieve their lifetime pursuit, without it life could be less meaningful. If a person only

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by today and

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future

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, they will

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interest in developing themselves for a better world.

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especially for countries having

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hope means everything for their survival in

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future

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will kill

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curiosity. I believe that human is naturally curious, and

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creative thinking lead humanity to develop and improve ourselves for a better

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, we always talk about

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dream

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, where everybody

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and imagination about their

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which gives

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motivation to their nation

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also

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people all over the world.

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, people thinking about consequences that might happen in the

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is protecting our society from social distraction and violence. Usually individuals before making any mistake or committing

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any crime, they normally think about their ramifications.

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example

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there are

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of movies like “End of the world” if you find out that there will be no tomorrow

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what kind of chaos it might create

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However

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some people spend too much time

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planning

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their

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, yet can not enjoy their present life fully. To conclude, given the reason above I strongly disagree with the idea that we should only live by today. I am personally a big dreamer and I enjoy imagining

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our

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and have

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hope for a better life.

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, every nation and country or individual should have a

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to pursue and a

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to plan.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.5

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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319 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Present enjoyment
Future planning
Long-term satisfaction
Short-term gratification
Economic planning
Infrastructure development
Spontaneity
Immediate pleasures
Balanced approach
Mindfulness
Strategic foresight
Anticipation
Well-being
Present-mindedness
Prosperity

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Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Some people think governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems to help people to prevent illness and disease

While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?