Some people think that enjoying the present is more important than planning for the future for both countries and individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #future #countries #individuals

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on today than tomorrow for both countries and individuals. In

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I support the idea that

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people

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should always imagine and plan their

future

, especially

countries

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which are responsible for the entire nation. I will explain my reasons in

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following paragraphs.

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of all,

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think human needs a

dream

and hope to achieve their lifetime pursuit, without it life could be less meaningful. If a person only

live

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by today and

stop

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planing

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about

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the future

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, they will

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interest in developing themselves for a better world.

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especially for countries having

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hope means everything for their survival in

this

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era.

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, by stop thinking about

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will kill

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curiosity. I believe that human is naturally curious, and

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creative thinking lead humanity to develop and improve ourselves for a better

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For instance

, we always talk about

American

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the American

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dream

, where everybody

have

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their

dream

and imagination about their

future

which gives

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motivation to their nation

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people all over the world.

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, people thinking about consequences that might happen in the

future

is protecting our society from social distraction and violence. Usually individuals before making any mistake or committing

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any crime, they normally think about their ramifications.

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example

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there are

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of movies like “End of the world” if you find out that there will be no tomorrow

then

what kind of chaos it might create

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However

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some people spend too much time

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planning

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planing

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their

future

, yet can not enjoy their present life fully. To conclude, given the reason above I strongly disagree with the idea that we should only live by today. I am personally a big dreamer and I enjoy imagining

about

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our

future

and have

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hope for a better life.

Moreover

, every nation and country or individual should have a

dream

to pursue and a

future

to plan.

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