The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think that it will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disasvantages to having one language in the world?

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may become the only
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spoken in the world in the future owing to the developments in
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sector. The trend would bring positive as well as negative changes
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the world. There are two principal benefits of having only
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language
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,
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would not need to spend time
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studying a new
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to widen their opportunities. At the present time, many
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spend years
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because it is needed for their education or work. Education institutions in England,
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, require a high level of
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proficiency.
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, it is much easier to understand other
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when they speak the same
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as you since it minimizes misconceptions between different
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and countries.
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, these benefits do not overweigh the disadvantages of having only
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language
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English
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or any other
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becoming the only
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spoken would destroy the diversity of the world and alienize some
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. Languages are strongly attached to
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history and play
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culture
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development. Having
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language
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would result in
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being similar to each other.
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, will lead to
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of the
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that have been developing for decades.
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, the trend might lead to the alienization of some
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since some
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still would speak the
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better than others.
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is because it has been proven that adapting to a new
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as a nation may take up to a decade. In conclusion, the population of the planet speaking
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language
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has positive sides as well as negative sides.
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,
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of the trend are far greater than
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since the diversity of
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may be harmed.
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